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I was there

Views (3292) Anger Created on 12-10-06 Flag

I was there, Through all the rainy storms

I was there, through all your changing forms

I was there, when no one else wanted to be

I was there, everytime you needed me

I was there, when everyone else gave up

I was there, when you felt like a worthless lump

I was there, when you felt confused

I was there, to try to keep you amuzed

I was there, when times got really bad

I was there, even when you made me mad

I was there, when you were hurting inside

I was there, to go along for the life long ride

I was there, when no one gave a shit

I was there, to help you out of the pit

I was there, to hold you when you cried

I was there, to congradulate you when you tried

I was there, when your sky seemed to fall

I was there when everyone else made you feel so small

I was there, when you started to feel crazy

I was there, to push you when you got lazy

I was there to help you when you got sick

I was there, when the air seemedto be to thick

I was there, when things werent working out

I was there, to say i loved you without a doubt

I was there, to give you all of your needs

I was there, when you planted out 2 little seeds

I was there, when there was nothing to do

I was there, but where were you?

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On December 20th 2007 smith82595 Said :
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OMG!! THIS IS SUCH THE TRUTH.. EVERY WORD OF IT
On November 2nd 2007 deathafying666 Said :
deathafying666 damnnnnnnnnnn that poem was the bomb
On October 20th 2007 mamaz1620 Said :
mamaz1620 I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM I AM ONLY 16 AND I WAS WITH THIS GUY FOR 3 YEARS AND I WOULD B THERE FOR HIM 24/7 BUT HE REALLY WASNT THERE FOR ME...SO I CAN RELATE I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM...AND THE BITCH UNDER ME DOSENT KNOW NETHING CUZ SHE PROBABLY DOESNT KNOW A GOOD POEM WEN SHE READS ONE
On October 20th 2007 LettieG2007 Said :
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Women stop giving your all and make him work for you it always works and it last and he loves you more . Sad Pathetic poem say something different its been said!
On July 27th 2007 ebbasherman Said :
ebbasherman I really liked your poem..it remindes me alot of me and my husband. He has been in prison for so long now and he still has another year. It really made me think about all that ive done for he and i. good job..
On July 17th 2007 TaUroNui Said :
TaUroNui wow that is a cool poem
On July 10th 2007 ally51 Said :
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I started to get that feeling in the pit of my stomach that I haven't gotten in a long time. You brought back some feelings that I thought I had got over. Can I post this in my blog? I would love to share this with some folks.
On June 28th 2007 bluedevilschic Said :
bluedevilschic i know exactly how u feel it reminds me of my ex. Great poem
On June 11th 2007 glittervikki Said :
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wow. this was really really good
On May 27th 2007 CRISSYT09 Said :
CRISSYT09 now i'm bout to send this to my ex. this was so true
On May 26th 2007 trevonjaven Said :
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excellent...that was great and so true..I can relate to that
On May 12th 2007 vcothrum501 Said :
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man! wonderful job! well written. ive also been there and done that.
On May 10th 2007 Leonel89121 Said :
Leonel89121 It reminds me of how my wife feels about me(hopefully!) I like how you write
On May 6th 2007 Sacha85 Said :
Sacha85 wow.. other then the 2 lil seeds, that was me and my soon to be X husband
On April 25th 2007 DBLNJENN Said :
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wow, everything in ur poem is my soon to be x and me...well done...
On March 20th 2007 Purp7eFi7th Said :
Purp7eFi7th awww i really like this poem its really good
On March 11th 2007 mswrinkle Said :
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Wow this poem is really good. Now I have to go and tell someone something. Really insitefull keep it up.
On March 7th 2007 pinkpanther93 Said :
pinkpanther93 i loved the last line
On February 23rd 2007 lilsweetfamily Said :
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I really liked it a lot. I am going through things right now with my husband who is military and wow I felt like I had asked you to write this for me. You did a good job
On February 15th 2007 lilmexiangel Said :
lilmexiangel that was really good, and men really dont know how to treat women now a days.we are there for them but they just tend to disappear. but moving on that was really good. keep it up girl
On February 11th 2007 qthetreau Said :
qthetreau WOW! this is incredibly intense! i love it! It is extremely expressive, as well as impressive.
On January 31st 2007 daisykat2291 Said :
daisykat2291 finally we have a winner splendid work
On January 14th 2007 maxyn Said :
maxyn yes excellent
On January 1st 2007 ilovebobbb Said :
ilovebobbb You know, i congradulate you cause usually i hate rhyming poems i liked this one. i think you could have made it more original but overall i say goodjob. keep writing. go a little deeper next time.
On December 27th 2006 hollielewlove Said :
hollielewlove wow thats really good...all mine sound cheezy lol