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Note.. lol, i wrote this with my boyfriend after i was publicly humiliated at skool, writing is an outlet for both of us, and i was hurt so bad, he too was feeling the pain. so we wrote it together ♥
Children roam these empty streets
With lust filled eyes and jagged hearts
Narrow frames and crooked teeth,
The whole more valuable than each part.
And the grasp you have upon this group
Is as fragile as a pile of ash.
They know your lies and weakness
With each open hand you bluntly lash.
These soft legged girls
And hard faced boys.
They know no God,
They have no voice
| On June 7th 2007 LHCK Said : | |
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this is excellent |
| On May 20th 2007 slipknotbabe Said : | |
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very good |
| On April 23rd 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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Haha! Aw. What's it like creating art with your boyfriend? Do you get too sappy for each other sometimes? I really like the moral point of the story. As chickengirl said, true. Gives me an idea..:) |
| On April 12th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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wow, this is good. I get what your saying here, so, so true! |


