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Welcome Home My Love
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Created on 7-8-08
Welcome Back My Love
July 8, '08
When i see you coming through,
My heart tumbles down, i don't know what to do;
I wanna come run to you,
But i control myself and i waited here for you.
And then i see your smile,
Boy,I just melt down inside?
Then i see you in the eyes,
I see true love and there are no lies.
Then you hold me in my hands,
and i shiver deep down;
I whisper "Honey, let's go home"
But the truth is ,i just can't wait to be with you alone.
kissofasia...
Please Login to post comments| On August 4th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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the emotion you portray in just a few lines is amazing!!! it's so sweet :) |
| On July 11th 2008 5cheychey5 Said : | |
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wow, its short but i can feel the emotion in it! im so glad that you got to see your hubby! thats just great. |
| On July 10th 2008 xX1ncINalifeXx Said : | |
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so real and amazing kmpp :) |
| On July 9th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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YAY! I'm so glad! |
| On July 9th 2008 kjclevenger Said : | |
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Good job! I really like reading your poems. keep'em coming! ;) |
| On July 9th 2008 kjclevenger Said : | |
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Good job! I really like reading your poems. keep'em coming! ;) |
| On July 8th 2008 AirplaneMan Said : | |
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i hate love poems....but ur's is so meaning and heartfelt. I love it and so glad you 2 r together again |
| On July 8th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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LOVE IT!!! i can only imagine what you felt!! lol i would love to have that feeling!! lol! nice job lol like i said LOVEIT!! |
| On July 8th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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ohh very nice, beats mine! |
| On July 8th 2008 swadersm Said : | |
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Nice! |
| On July 8th 2008 Robert93635 Said : | |
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sweet. |
| On July 8th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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that is good that u are reunited. |
| On July 8th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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This was really good. I can really feel the love in this one. |
| On July 8th 2008 imnotgay90 Said : | |
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this is very good. i wish i was good at writing poems
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| On July 8th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Very sweet. I take it he's back then. :) |
| On July 8th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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This is such a sweet poem!!! |
| On July 8th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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aww wow this is so emotional!! And I really enjoyed it. Great work! |
| On July 8th 2008 MomoHoshi456 Said : | |
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this is so deep, so amazing i wouldn't know how to show an expression but it's amazing |
| On July 8th 2008 megaeden Said : | |
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you never cease to find a way to express your love for him. im love this poem |
| On July 8th 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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I like how you used a different rhyming style in every stanza. :D Great job. |
