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Prisoner's Of Life

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Fear

Created on 6-27-08

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We are born to live,

Then we live to grow;

Grow to LOVE,

And then we get married;

Married to elderly,

Elderly to suffer;

Suffer to die, die to rest,

We,all of us are prisoner's of life;

Why are we born only to die?

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On July 2nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :

	there is so much more to life than death. but interesting write here.

On July 1st 2008 Liz912 Said :

	very good, very true. Prisoner of life...We are born to die to make changes in this world I believe.

On June 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :

	so true. very nice!

On June 30th 2008 bmullinax0517 Said :

	this is so tru....i love it

On June 30th 2008 Robert93635 Said :

	i like this, so true

On June 28th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said :

	I like it and agree with it.

On June 28th 2008 chayeah22 Said :

	Hypothetically we're all dying. I can relate too this. It's very true.

On June 28th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :

	or maybe it should be that we die to live? who knows? I don't even know what I just said..

On June 28th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :

	we were born to make life out of ourselves and then die when what we needed to do on life is over or finished. so there. :) I like this though, it's short and to the point. but then again, some people don't even live this long to go through this whole cycle..

On June 28th 2008 hpfan731 Said :

	deep and very true!

On June 28th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said :

	wow now thats deep ive often found myself thinking about that

On June 28th 2008 ChristieSaya Said :

	it's good. but ppl not born just to die, huh

On June 28th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said :

	i love it, its so true, kinda sad tho

On June 27th 2008 justjetjustis Said :

	so true lol

On June 27th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said :

	I've thought about this myself. Good job.

On June 27th 2008 5cheychey5 Said :

	i think about this idea a lot. and i still have no answer.

On June 27th 2008 kjclevenger Said :

	Amazing! Good poem!

On June 27th 2008 lisaljb Said :

	Your mom did an excellent job on writing this! It's interesting to think about, I've thought about it many times!

On June 27th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :

	really deep thought when u put it that way and really think about it. i loved this

On June 27th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :

	Its really good. & Its true.

On June 27th 2008 williamscott7 Said :

	It's really good! Now I know where you get your awesome poem writting skills. I guess it's hereditary or something. Life's about the Journey, not the destination. And besides, a time is coming when all shall be perfect, and death and sickness shall be no more. Evil will be pried out of the hearts of all people, and every one will be happy for eternity! :D YAAAY!!! Excellent poem. GOD BLESS YOU!

On June 27th 2008 TheBranster Said :

	were labrats in God's experiement? i heard a certain oil is suppose to add a few years on life. hmm, olive oil or something. hmm.

On June 27th 2008 CharTheKnight Said :

	It's the journey that really matters... And I love the format. Your mom is very talented. :D

On June 27th 2008 megaeden Said :

	Maybe....you dont just live to die....maybe when we grow elderly and pass away we can die with a satisfaction that we touched someone and actually got to feel and understand what love is so you can bask in it for eternity.....but yeah awsome poem!

On June 27th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :

	yea as you said...it is reality...and it seems so sad....so i guess we should live every moment to its fullest....even though death seems so horrible at least the time we spent on earth was lived well!! i love this poem....AWESOME!! =D

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