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For my sisters

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The Queen to Abide

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Growing up wasn't easy,
Living in the 3'rd world country;
I lived day by day,
Don't know what tomorrow could be.

Now that i'm halfway there,
I'll help you through life my dear sisters;
But you have to follow all my rules,
For if you don't, I will be rotten and cruel.

We can be friends outside,
But at home,I'm a queen to abide;
Understand this strickness of me,
A better future,in you is all i wanted to see.

Living life provided for is easy,
Working hard for someone ain't funny;
I know the worth of every penny,
Dear sisters,to you,i won't take it easy..

          kissofasia...

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On June 28th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop oh my dear lord I think I almost cried.. I have sisters too ;) It's like scolding lovingly.. eh I don't get that but yeah, um, good poem !!
On June 28th 2008 depressionsux6 Said :
depressionsux6 I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!
On June 27th 2008 MCRsLover Said :
MCRsLover really awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On June 26th 2008 xXkenzieXz Said :
xXkenzieXz wow thats different usually poems are about all this love crap, but this this is different i like it.
On June 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 just be careful to not stifle them by being too strict. sometimes experience can be the best tutor u know?
On June 25th 2008 keegan4606 Said :
keegan4606 wow amazing hun! love it
On June 25th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 wow.....they are lucky to have someone like you who will teach them that life is not a piece of cake...it is really good...you put so much feeling into this poem. ILOVEIT!!! =D
On June 25th 2008 kjclevenger Said :
kjclevenger Amazing poem! writen with so much feeling..very good
On June 25th 2008 justjetjustis Said :
justjetjustis wow
On June 25th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk awesome.
On June 25th 2008 ChristieSaya Said :
ChristieSaya I know how you feel
On June 24th 2008 thuhchris Said :
thuhchris i feel you on this one..
On June 24th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 I love it. I grew up very poor and I make sure not to spoil my younger cousins and make them study and work hard. They are like brothers and sisters to me. It's a very important lessed because some kids expect everything to be handed to them on a silver platter.
On June 24th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said :
McRrOxMySoX8 I like how this poem shows your love towards your sisters even if it means being a bit hard at times.
On June 24th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Helpful, I hope they follow your examples.
On June 24th 2008 flea88123 Said :
flea88123 That is nice...It shows you care and want them to succeed....
On June 24th 2008 5cheychey5 Said :
5cheychey5 thats great. and its good that ur sisters wont get it easy. when u have it harder it builds character. good decision
On June 24th 2008 xX1ncINalifeXx Said :
xX1ncINalifeXx wow! good luck wef
On June 24th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet um wow lol...it was pretty good...rude yet good...
On June 24th 2008 hpfan731 Said :
hpfan731 wow...this poem is so touching!! you must really love and care about them.
On June 24th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said :
Andy2Anomaly Great job. I like it alot.
On June 24th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 oh i love it. and they may find it hard at times,but it is for the best. great job with this
On June 24th 2008 duhimallie94 Said :
duhimallie94 good job!
On June 24th 2008 LonelyBunni3 Said :
LonelyBunni3 "I lived day by day, Don't know what tomorrow could be." For one: Make sure you know what tense you're speaking from. Either past, present or future. The same mistake, I found, on the 4th line of the third stanza. Overall I like it. Keep writting.
On June 24th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster working hard for someone aint funny? well what if your a clown? nice poem. beautiful it wasss