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another old poem,just re-write it

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Destined Forever

Views (226) Love Created on 6-22-08 Flag

I never thought he could be the one;
To be my behalf and love me for who i am,
And He don't have to tell me anything;
For in his eyes,i know his entire feelings.

Whenever we get closer and closer;
We don't want anyone to bother,
For i am a jealous woman;
And he is a selfish man.

When he touch all over me,i lose control;
His lips are deadly, truly are my downfall,
Our love is so strong and real;
For we are bound and destined to be forever.

         kissofasia...

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On June 28th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop nyeh heh, love rules all
On June 25th 2008 keegan4606 Said :
keegan4606 very sweet! :)
On June 24th 2008 kjclevenger Said :
kjclevenger I think I said this on your other poems but...It's so good..it feels like you are writing right to me. Very good though.
On June 23rd 2008 5cheychey5 Said :
5cheychey5 this is great. its really sweet and honest.
On June 23rd 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Yeah lol @ TheBranster

Loved the poem though. Very sweet
On June 23rd 2008 megaeden Said :
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lol branster, but i really liked this poem.
On June 23rd 2008 ChristieSaya Said :
ChristieSaya sweet
On June 22nd 2008 xXkenzieXz Said :
xXkenzieXz aww thats so cute...i love it!!!!
On June 22nd 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs that made me happy :)
On June 22nd 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 I can truly see your love, and it is strong. It was beautiful as is all your work.
On June 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 love is a powerful motivator and apparently it has motivated u to write much.
On June 22nd 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said :
McRrOxMySoX8 This is such a sweet poem!
On June 22nd 2008 CharTheKnight Said :
CharTheKnight Great Structure... :D
On June 22nd 2008 hpfan731 Said :
hpfan731 awww...sweetness :)
On June 22nd 2008 AirplaneMan Said :
AirplaneMan Yo Branster always cuttin a joke lol....great poem though.
On June 22nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow this is great... I love it! :)
On June 22nd 2008 imnotgay90 Said :
imnotgay90 thats sweet.
On June 22nd 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 Awwww... it's so sweet! And to TheBranster, LOL!!! But seriously, this was an awesome poem. GOD BLESS YOU!
On June 22nd 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster reminds me that time i fount that nickel
On June 22nd 2008 duhimallie94 Said :
duhimallie94 awesome work
On June 22nd 2008 justjetjustis Said :
justjetjustis nice
On June 22nd 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh i like it
On June 22nd 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet "For i am a jealous woman; And he is a selfish man." lol! love that line cause it reminds me of my relationship...sorta