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Can This be Love?

Views (186) Love Created on 6-20-08 Flag

Beautiful eyes with a broken heart;
This man i met that glows in the dark,
My heart beats faster whenever he speak,
I dream of his touch like i'm some kinda freak.

Day by day, 
We talk and glance for a while;
This man captured my heart,
Isn't that a crime.

I have this special feeling,
I think i'm going insane;
How can i long for someone,
Who belong to another.


Can this be love?
I don't think so but i mean YES.
I think he feel the same way,
He wants to come only to meet
me.

        kissofasia...

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On June 23rd 2008 rawrXfacexD Said :
rawrXfacexD Toatally been there :( Not goning back :D
On June 22nd 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs i like the ryming u used
On June 22nd 2008 ChristieSaya Said :
ChristieSaya :) sweet
On June 21st 2008 5cheychey5 Said :
5cheychey5 yep, it can be love and it was love. i like it. i like reading old poems because you can see what has happened since then. good job. :)
On June 21st 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 could it be love?....i would think so....this is a sweet poem. i enjoyed it
On June 20th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 This one makes you question, "Is it really everything I want and dream?" I love it!
On June 20th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster could this be love? well, if not, at least the thought got a good poem out of it
On June 20th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said :
McRrOxMySoX8 I really like this one!
On June 20th 2008 AirplaneMan Said :
AirplaneMan love it like always lol...
On June 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 It's lovely! Your poems absolutely amaze me. GOD BLESS YOU!
On June 20th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard rrrrr... I meant quandary
On June 20th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Really nice poem. Quite the quandry.
On June 20th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow this amazing... I wonder this all the time. Very nice :)
On June 20th 2008 thuhchris Said :
thuhchris beautfiul..