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An Open letter
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Created on 6-13-08
Darling, i want you to listen,
These words i so long to tell;
This poem made to be an open letter,
For everyone to know how much i truly feel.
I'm sorry for being upset sometimes,
For being emotional and hard at times;
I've made mistakes,I've few regrets,
But i'm trying so hard to be the best.
The love i had felt but withhold on you
You didn't give up when i pussed you through;
You are my knight in shining armor,
The only one i muchly adore.
I maybe crazy and unreasonable;
But believe me,my love for you is insatiable,
For all the sadness,anger i may have caused you,
I'm sorry,i'd do every excuse just to be with you.
You are my life and everything;
My soulmate,my teacher,my very best friend,
The reason i was born and destined to be with,
Darling,i'll be your wife 'till the end....
kissofasia...
Please Login to post comments| On July 7th 2008 6615sweet Said : | |
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...im not so warm for the lubby dubby stuff...but me like it.... |
| On June 28th 2008 prettyred88 Said : | |
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awwww i like it |
| On June 27th 2008 MCRsLover Said : | |
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so amazing, luvz it! |
| On June 23rd 2008 rawrXfacexD Said : | |
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Nice :D It gave me the cold chills :D |
| On June 23rd 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Wow. That was really good. |
| On June 22nd 2008 xXkenzieXz Said : | |
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wow.....if i was a guy that would be nice to get!!!!!lololol Thats really sweet emotions everywhere i love it!!! |
| On June 19th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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awww :3 so shweet.. I want a love like this.. And I'm glad nothing was wrong with you and your man :)) |
| On June 16th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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That was perfect! I loved the way you just opened up and let it flow out. And I have to say-I like the use of puncuation...It makes it so much easier to read and understand. Kudos to you!! |
| On June 15th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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you have a relationship in heaven....you really portray true love in this poem....and i wish i could find love like yours.....Awesome job!!!!! =] |
| On June 15th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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poems from the heart always say the most. u have no problem imbuing ur work with feeling. good job |
| On June 14th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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Luvs it! So much passion and love. I hope I can some day have a relationship like that. GOD BLESS YOU! |
| On June 14th 2008 quietturtle Said : | |
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Wow nice poem. Makes me think of Joanna. |
| On June 14th 2008 thuhchris Said : | |
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sweet. i love it =] |
| On June 14th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said : | |
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aww that is sweet ur husband is lucky to have you this is the sweetest poem |
| On June 14th 2008 ignorantsanity Said : | |
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nice :)
deep and meaningful :)
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| On June 14th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Wow...So deep...I can feel your love for him! |
| On June 13th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said : | |
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Bomb.Bomb.Bomb. =] |
| On June 13th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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wow that awesome |
| On June 13th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said : | |
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Wow, I very much love it. You are a great writer. |
| On June 13th 2008 kjclevenger Said : | |
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Dang...thats a good poem. It was like you were writing that to me as i was reading it. very good. |
| On June 13th 2008 5cheychey5 Said : | |
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thats so nice. im glad that everything is good between you two. |
| On June 13th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aww very sweet. loved every part of it ♥ |
| On June 13th 2008 sunnyattheneo Said : | |
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very nice. |
| On June 13th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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This poem was so sweet! Great job! =D |
| On June 13th 2008 timmybedunah Said : | |
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I like the title. Fits the poem! Bravo! |
