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Created on 6-11-08
My heart breaks everyday,
Since the day you went away;
So sad but it's true,
Tell me, what should i do?
I never believe you'd leave me behind,
Now,i'm insane, going out of my mind.
You said, "Don't be a fool";
Baby, i can't take no pain anymore.
You know i'm so deep and that i believe
I wish that i am so naive;
You said you love me, i can't feel that,
Come, complete me and it'll all change that.
Who should i turn to?
And understand what i've been going through,
Crying is my only escape,
My days and nights aren't that great...
kissofasia...
Please Login to post comments| On July 1st 2008 Liz912 Said : | |
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My nights are torture, the tears won't stop their flow...it's like they have a mind of their own. HEY THAT'LL BE GREAT FOR A POEM. Mine, hehe. LOL. Nice poem :P |
| On June 22nd 2008 xXkenzieXz Said : | |
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ooo i love the rhyming parts and the flow of the poem...also the meanning very sad..... |
| On June 19th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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when the one you love is so far away... so sad.. Great poem |
| On June 14th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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alaways great to look towards future, instead of lingering in past |
| On June 13th 2008 chamaolie Said : | |
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:( that was really good!!! he's an idiot for leaving!!! hehehehe.... |
| On June 13th 2008 kjclevenger Said : | |
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if U were writing that to me...I would've came back. thats how good it is. |
| On June 13th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Great poem, it's rather sad indeed. Well done! |
| On June 12th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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i think he needs to come back :7 |
| On June 12th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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this made me so sad....are you ok, for real? I'm here..... |
| On June 12th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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i felt as though you were reaching....for him....and he was not reaching back....it was soo sad....but it is an awesome poem |
| On June 12th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said : | |
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awesome poem and i could never get tired of your poems |
| On June 11th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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awww, i really like this one. its sad but can definitely relate |
| On June 11th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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Oh, I'm sorry! It's very sad. I hope you can feel better soon! Maybe your man will return to you, and you can be happy again! Excellent poem. GOD BLESS YOU! |
| On June 11th 2008 5cheychey5 Said : | |
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i really like this. its so hard when someone you love is beyond your reach, i dont think i could have ever understood what you met before my love moved away. it really is the saddest thing. this is good. |
| On June 11th 2008 AirplaneMan Said : | |
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I like that one..a lost love |
| On June 11th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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aww... this is sweet and sad. Very nice |
| On June 11th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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it is extemely sad...one of the worst emotional pains there is |
| On June 11th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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sad cute i looove it! |
| On June 11th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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This is so sad but sweet! |
| On June 11th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Awwww but you have the hope and knowing he will come back becauuse he loves you! |
| On June 11th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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i like this one and i feel your pain...kmp |
| On June 11th 2008 timmybedunah Said : | |
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Awww..sweet! |
