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i wish and i continue wishing....Rate this Poem
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I wish there's only love and happiness;
Everyone's happy, living with harmony and peace,
Family should stick together;
No arguments,no quarrels, no misunderstandings,
There should be only love and care.
I wish there's no war;
Politics is clean; there should be no beggars
Everyone must have food to eat;
And there should be nobody sleeping in the street.
I wish life in earth is all that and fair,
No life slaughtered, no serial killers;
No prostitution, no drug addiction,
No rich and famous, no starved and poor.
I wish there are no disasters;
Tornadoes,tsunamis and the effects of global warmings,
Why does the water become greasy;
Those birds and trees i no longer see.
Why do we have to be rude and greedy?
For someone whose mouth that's sick and hungry?
They sell thier organs to earn a penny,
To have sardines at dinner,to live by day by day...
Kissofasia...
| On June 16th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I couldn't have said it any better myself! I love this one. There are just some things in life that will never make sense. |
| On June 15th 2008 AirplaneMan Said : | |
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that's the thing..ppl need somehing to fight about... |
| On June 9th 2008 MCRsLover Said : | |
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loves it! |
| On June 9th 2008 ChristieSaya Said : | |
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So touching.. God bless you..! |
| On June 9th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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Great poem! I wish for a world like that, too. BUT... don't worry! It's more than just a useless hope! The time is coming when GOD shuns evil from the world, and we have eternal peace! The time of this evil system of things is coming to an end! YAAAY!!! GOD BLESS YOU! |
| On June 8th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said : | |
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that would be a great world. i wish it could happen like that. |
| On June 8th 2008 chokosei Said : | |
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like it |
| On June 8th 2008 N5607 Said : | |
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great great! |
| On June 8th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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would be nice, but nothing we can do. just gotta be appreciative of what we have and lend a helping hand whenever neccesary |
| On June 8th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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So true. You Rock kissofasia! You're making a change and you don't even know it! Everyone who sees this poem should take it to heart and walk away with a new idea: to change the world. PEACE! |
| On June 8th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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this would be the PERFECT world!!! i would love to live there!!` |
| On June 8th 2008 Mogeygriffin Said : | |
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powerful |
| On June 8th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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all the problems of our world and the why-can't-we questions are gathered in this one poem. I feel the pain too. Everyone should. |
| On June 8th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Amazing... sorry that was a short comment, but I really do love this one! |
| On June 8th 2008 Dannibabe94 Said : | |
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I love it! |
| On June 8th 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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this is amazing. you did a WONDERFUL job on this one! wow love it! |
| On June 8th 2008 5cheychey5 Said : | |
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really wonderful. its so true, and i wish people would change and help others instead of be greedy too. its like most of the people who care, aren't in a position to really help. its sad. |
| On June 8th 2008 timmybedunah Said : | |
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I agree!!! Bravo! |
| On June 8th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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I agree with you! I also wish I could help everyone but theres only so much I could do. |
| On June 8th 2008 watrgrl Said : | |
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very nice and heartfelt |
| On June 8th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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u and me both...i dont like politics but i have contemplated running for president in 12 yrs or so. |
| On June 8th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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thousands and thousands of people feel this way! |
| On June 8th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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errrr,i wish i can help those who are in need....but i can't for i only have enough... |
| On June 8th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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P.S: I don't know if this poem is good enough for ya'll
I just want to say"Let's love one another".
We're all in the same journey.We live to die...
I just wish i can help everyone but i can't and i see them everywhere. |


