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Created on 6-3-08
Some things surely made for fun;
Short skirts,dresses,nail polishes,
Oh! She looks so refine;
Whenever she walks and talks;
She's everything you desire.
But that isn't me;
Jeans and shirts,sthat's all,
And I'd be happy.
I'll wear dress, Diamonds and Pearls;
But I'll have more fun getting dirty.
Darlin' listen to what i have to say...
I'd love you to love me;
for all that i am,
I'd love you to love me;
For everything i can't become.
Please Login to post comments| On June 6th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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i love this!!! i understand where you are coming from!!!! it is kinda like how i am!! and people should love you FOR YOU!!! |
| On June 4th 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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this is a great poem! its kinda like me i'd rather get dirty!! lol |
| On June 4th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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beautiful! i don't really care what someone wears, unless it hasnt been washed for days. |
| On June 4th 2008 Mogami Said : | |
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Great. This certainly IS true... |
| On June 3rd 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Loved it! So true! I agree 100%! |
| On June 3rd 2008 angelofpurity5 Said : | |
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awesome poem im pretty much the same way id rather dress in a t-shirt and jeans great job |
| On June 3rd 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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i like it, nice job |
| On June 3rd 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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I hear ya! I'm the same way; I'm not gonna change who I am for a girl, no matter how much I like them. If the person you like doesn't like you back, that's their loss. Excellent poem! |
| On June 3rd 2008 lavenderloveu Said : | |
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aww! they should just love u for who u are. ur rite. |
| On June 3rd 2008 timmybedunah Said : | |
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Very well written! |
| On June 3rd 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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i love it and im the same way. id rather get dirty than dress up all nice |
| On June 3rd 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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That sounds like me! I hate wearing dresses. I like this poem a lot! |
| On June 3rd 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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This is good and I can definately feel it. I think it needs a little bit of tightening, but otherwise it's nice..-Lozer™ |
| On June 3rd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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wow..its great |
| On June 3rd 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Great poem... absolutely loved the last 2 lines |
