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which 1 would u have
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Created on 3-22-07
as i whisper sweet little nothings of a memorie long past i ask myself how things happened so fast too many decisons so hard to let go i am tainted beauty dont you know so so sad in a world so so bad full of rage and full of love jake or kyle which one would you have? one smokes pot and the other one is poor this sounds like some sick fantasy like the girl next door used to be her used to be me now i dont know who i wanna be |
Please Login to post comments| On April 13th 2007 lyssabean72792 Said : | |
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i like it. hmm well it depends....being poor isn't that bad but is he like homeless and wants u to always give him stuff poor? and just HOW MUCH pot does that other one smoke? i mean if it's like baddd than that's probably not something you should get into. |
| On March 30th 2007 LokiSeto Said : | |
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Well... not sure what kind of advice to give. I'd need to learn more but there is nothing wrong with being poor. |
| On March 22nd 2007 lovez2play Said : | |
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i like it |
| On March 22nd 2007 DemBamaGurls Said : | |
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i really like this one...it reflects me so much. |
