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first date
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Created on 3-22-07
sadness fear joy and fate
so exited on our very first date
as i look into your eyes
and i see all the tears you've cried
then i weep a sweet lulibye
and say good bye
forever
forever
Please Login to post comments| On March 30th 2007 LokiSeto Said : | |
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Strange... you start the poem about many negative qualities and then good thing but then you end with saying god bye forever. |
