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Created on 2-7-07
sitting in an unfirmiliar home
sitting by the phone
waiting for a call from him
why are all the lights so dim
these iner demons come out to play
i will get my razor back one day
so drink the poison
swallow the pills
cast the spell
this void i will fill
the mind drifts
and the heart crys
while all my love dies
suicidal at last
cutter forever more
this has all happened so fast
Please Login to post comments| On April 13th 2007 lyssabean72792 Said : | |
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yah i agree with lokiseto..there's definetly a pattern in your poems....but that kinda shows that you have the same feelings a lot, and that those feelings are what you use as your inspirations. |
| On March 30th 2007 LokiSeto Said : | |
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Hmmmm... I'm noticing a distinct pattern here. Anyways I hope you did get to love him. |
