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Created on 3-30-08
She was so lost,she was so confused.
She didn't know what to do after being used.
He was her world,and the moment he did that it shattered.
She was drowning in tears,because he was the only thing that mattered.
She swore she couldn't live without him,she knew she needed him.
Her chances of being without him were dim.
So hurt,so much pain.
All of that love went in vain.
She couldn't take it anymore,so she went to her room and grabbed a knife.
And on that night she ended her life.
Please Login to post comments| On April 1st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Aww~ that is sad. :( I love the poem though. Nice job~ |
| On March 31st 2008 C4444 Said : | |
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Ohhhh my that is so heartbreaking but u know that happens in real life true poem good job!!!!! |
| On March 31st 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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so sad... |
| On March 30th 2008 kesaia1029 Said : | |
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nu uh,well it could be,but I wrote it about a girl whos bf cheated on her |
| On March 30th 2008 spongbobsgirl Said : | |
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are you talking about your dad? |
