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Created on 3-26-08
Shes no longer here,it was time for her to go,
But the fact that I couldn't help her leaves my heart low.
She used to have a life,where she was only trying to get along.
When she tried improving her life,things only went wrong.
Her life was so full of dread,so full of pain,so full of death.
It tortured her so,right 'till her last breath.
She should have stayed,but she wanted it to end.
I guess it was just to hard for her mind to mend.
But if she wanted to go,it was because she needed to release,
And at least I know she is finally at peace.
Please Login to post comments| On March 26th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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The wording, and emotion is really good on this one. I really like it lots. |
| On March 26th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said : | |
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Aww. That's really sad. I've had the same experience, so I feel for ya. |
