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A feeling I get every now and then..

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She left me here,and took herself instead.

One of the many things that bring me dread.

I needed her,just like she needed me.

I begged her to stay,but she apparently ignored my plea.

 

He left me entirely,and didn't even care.

He knew that he would fill my heart with despair.

I didn't know why he enjoyed torturing my heart,

I feel because of me we are now apart.

 

She was taken away,no one to ever see her again.

Only the thoughts and memories of her remain.

She ascended to quickly,I couldn't even say good bye.

Because neither of us knew,she was soon going to die.

 

My poor little angel,I didn't know why she had to go.

Because ever since shes been gone,I've missed her so.

The little smile on her face,the way she held my hand,

Why she had to go I'll never understand.

 

All of these things leave me feeling depressed.

To think all of this would happen,no one guessed.

All of my pain has gone unspoken

And all of it simply leaves me broken.

 

This is a merge of different things a lot of my poems have said.I decided to put them all together...First person I am talking about is Crystal,an old best friend (still is) of mine.Second person is my dad,who left me when I was 6.The third person is a girl I met in the hospital,who died of a brain tumor.The last person is my little sister who died of a disease called Duncan's Disease.



On March 31st 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess All lessons love. Painful paths we must sometimes walk. If you learned from it, you are better off
On March 27th 2008 Darkenedsoul21 Said :
Darkenedsoul21 Nice poem! And I'm sorry to hear about ur sister it's a shame.
On March 25th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 wow this has alot of meaning, very nice
On March 25th 2008 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 Sad but good, Good way of expressing your grief though!! You have a way with words,I look forward to reading more of what you write.
On March 25th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said :
AnaAlicia07 THIS IS SAD..I'M SORRY ABOUT EVERYTHING...I LIKE THIS POEM VERY GOOD..AND HOPE TO READ MORE YOU ARE A GOOD POET FROM WHAT I CAN SEE HERE..♥
On March 25th 2008 quietturtle Said :
quietturtle This made teary eyed. good poem.
On March 25th 2008 spongbobsgirl Said :
spongbobsgirl you've been thru a lot...
On March 25th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 sorry about everything that happend to you you really know how to write poems
On March 25th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s aww so sad. my heart goes out to ya girl
On March 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Aww~ You've been through so much! :( I loved the poem!
On March 25th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX Very depressing.
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