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Created on 3-22-08
Daddy,Daddy,please don't go.
Please don't leave me all alone.
Please don't let me fall into harm,
Please don't leave me on my own.
Can't you see how much I need you?
I need you here to help me through.
I need you to help me through every day,
And say those things daddies are supposed to say.
Daddy,all I need you to do is listen to me,
And promise me you'll never leave.
Please Login to post comments| On March 24th 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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It's amazing how some things in us remain childlike & we can bring them to the surface at any time. Well done |
| On March 24th 2008 quietturtle Said : | |
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wow very deep. |
| On March 24th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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awww very realistic |
| On March 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Aww~ sadness* I wish my Dad was more caring~ I love the poem though :) |
| On March 23rd 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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this makes me miss my dad |
| On March 23rd 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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wow intense |
| On March 22nd 2008 spongbobsgirl Said : | |
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ooooh thats so sad... |
