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My Love
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Created on 3-21-08
What did a boy like me,
Do to deserve a girl that as sweet as can be?
Shes just so perfect in every way,
Shes more amazing than any words can say.
From her angel like eyes,
To her gorgeous flowing hair,
There isn't a girl like her anywhere.
She doesn't care about my house or my car
She goes the extra mile no matter how far.
Shes always here,she'll always care
The one person I can count on to be there.
Please Login to post comments| On March 22nd 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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your poems have a good flow to them and you word them just right so i like this one |
| On March 21st 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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so sweet...i love it! |
| On March 21st 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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awww i love, love poems like this |
| On March 21st 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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wow, i love it! |
| On March 21st 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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awww. that was nice. I loved it
:D |
| On March 21st 2008 craxychik Said : | |
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love it!!!! i like how u wrote from a guy's perspective that's very cool! lol
:)♫ |
| On March 21st 2008 sxyindbtch Said : | |
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awwwwwww.... :))) |
| On March 21st 2008 sxyindbtch Said : | |
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awwwwwww.... :))) |
| On March 21st 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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awww... |
| On March 21st 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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awww |
| On March 21st 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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love the flow |
| On March 21st 2008 ZD1990 Said : | |
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"She goes the extra mile no matter how far."
I like that line but the rest is somewhat cliché. I guess all girls just think the same. OMFG RHYME OWNED. |
| On March 21st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Aww~ |
