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I dunno what inspired me to make this

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The Alone

Views (163) Pain Created on 3-21-08 Flag

She isn't fake,she isn't real.

She has nothing that she feels.

The life she has does not exsist.

The family she has does not care.

All of the things she believes she lives,

And yet its as though shes not there.

Her smile is not of our reality

Her presence here is a broken soul

She does not posses mortality.

Her blood is all of her fears,

And yet the only real thing are the girls black tears. 

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On March 27th 2008 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 beautiful. kmp when you write more. your work keeps the reader thinking
On March 25th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow very nice!
On March 22nd 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 that must suck balls but i do like it
On March 21st 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 wow thats really good... i love it!!!
On March 21st 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy This is a very beautiful poem. One of your best
On March 21st 2008 craxychik Said :
craxychik very beautifully written...i really like it!!! another amazing piece :) ♫
On March 21st 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 love it
On March 21st 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s i love it!
On March 21st 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 love it
On March 21st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll lol lovely* typo
On March 21st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Oh I love this! Loovely job~
On March 21st 2008 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 wow!!! Beautiful and deep, this comes so close to the way I feel most of the time!! Great Job