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What I've Done For You

Views (185) Anger Created on 3-19-08 Flag

So many things that I've done for you,

Tried to make you feel happy when you were feeling blue,

Getting good grades so you could be proud,

Quieting the house down when it got real loud.

Always tried to put a smile on your face,

Trying to be in your good grace.

I've been living,trying to impress you.

But as I was trying,my hatred grew.

I'm done now,I'm over you,

All of my feelings for you are through.

I just wanted to tell you,in case you didn't have a clue,

I wanted you to remember what I've done for you. 

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On March 20th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 I know too well how this feels!
On March 20th 2008 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 I can relate well to this poem
On March 19th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 i love it
On March 19th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol this poem resembles how i feel about my dad. i love him, try to empress him and i wind up hating him. How does this all work out? Well, anyway, I liked the poem!!!!
On March 19th 2008 spongbobsgirl Said :
spongbobsgirl its really great i remember when i felt like i hated my dad...(uh, yesterday)
On March 19th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow that's sad... but I'll give it a *thumbs up* since it was so good! Keep up the great work! :)
On March 19th 2008 sen7593 Said :
sen7593 aww. sad, and i love it.
On March 19th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s love it. makes me think of me n my mom sometimes.
On March 19th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 tru that well said
On March 19th 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy Nice twist on the story. One of your best XD I like it.
On March 19th 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess Wow. I cannot even begin to describe to you the depths to which I identify with this one
On March 19th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This is one of my favs of yours so far. It's so well written~
On March 19th 2008 HeartBroken166 Said :
HeartBroken166 It's a well written poem. =] I like it. *hi5*
On March 19th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Awww so sad but good :)