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4 my dad who was never there 4 meRate this Poem
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Where Were You
I've been alone for so long,
No daddy to sing me a good night song.
No one to watch me get awards at school.
No parent to encourage me and tell me I'm cool.
No father to carry my in his big strong arms.
No person to protect me from anyones harm.
Why weren't you there,holding me close?
Why weren't you there when I needed you most?
| On March 19th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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short simple yet touching ! great |
| On March 18th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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~hugs~ mine wasn't there either. Love the poem!! |
| On March 18th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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This one kinda hits hard, but I know exactly where your coming from. This one is absolutely great, |
| On March 18th 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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I am so sorry for the hurt in your heart. I don't know your circumstances but consider this: My children were stolen from me by their father over 3 years ago. He has disappeared off the face of the earth with them. One day, they will feel just like you, wondering why Mommy wasn't there. Please let me assure you, it has nothing to do with a lack of love. I hope you find the answers you seek |
| On March 18th 2008 atomicrebirth Said : | |
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Wow. That's beautiful. |
| On March 18th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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wow that's sad... this is great though :) |
| On March 18th 2008 skitzoangel Said : | |
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tear tear |
| On March 18th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said : | |
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Very nice, I can sort of relate |
| On March 18th 2008 sades17 Said : | |
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I know just how you feel. I'm what 30 years old now and now my father wants to be a part of my life; Oh did I mention he needs a kidney. |
| On March 18th 2008 craxychik Said : | |
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!♥ |
| On March 18th 2008 sen7593 Said : | |
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aww. thats sad. really good. |
| On March 18th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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it makes me sad. but i love it...those are the same questions i always had for my dad |
| On March 18th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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awww thats sad!!! thats really good!!!!! |
| On March 18th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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Beautiful |


