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My first Joy poem...hope u like.

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That One Time

Views (47) Joy Created on 3-16-08 Flag

That one time when I was with you,
It was when I was feeling blue,
But then I saw that smile on your face,
And just like that my frown was replaced.

All my cares were the last thought on my mind,
When I was with you it was shocking to find,
That I was enjoying myself for the first time,
And that everything felt like it was going to be fine.

You made me feel like I was me again,
One of those few people I could call a friend.
You were so full of faith,so full of hope.
A person you'd never see mope.

She helped me through all of my strife,
She showed me a new way of llife.
She did so many things to help me shine.
She guided me through that one hard time.

 

This is for my bff who helped me through the time when I was in the hospital when there was something wrong with my kidneys.

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On March 18th 2008 craxychik Said :
craxychik i love it!!!! it's always good to have a friend to help you through those tough days!!:)
On March 17th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 It's very emotional, I loved it!
On March 17th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 cute i like it