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For the girl I met in the hospitalRate this Poem
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Goodbye
God took you away.
It doesn't seem fair,
but in the back of my mind,
you will always be there.
You weren't a close friend,
but our paths did cross,
and your absence in this world,
is to me a great loss.
You were too young to die, and
too innocent to feel that pain.
Only heaven benefits,
because you it has now gained.
I may think of you a little less
with each passing day,
but your strength is something I won't forget,
you have changed me in a way.
I wish for you eternal peace;
that's what you deserve my friend.
I hope I lead my life well enough
to meet up with you in the end.
It doesn't seem fair,
but in the back of my mind,
you will always be there.
You weren't a close friend,
but our paths did cross,
and your absence in this world,
is to me a great loss.
You were too young to die, and
too innocent to feel that pain.
Only heaven benefits,
because you it has now gained.
I may think of you a little less
with each passing day,
but your strength is something I won't forget,
you have changed me in a way.
I wish for you eternal peace;
that's what you deserve my friend.
I hope I lead my life well enough
to meet up with you in the end.
| On March 17th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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so beautiful |
| On March 16th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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everything that needed to be said was said so beautifully and in good order this is great! |
| On March 16th 2008 atomicrebirth Said : | |
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That's so beautiful.=) |
| On March 15th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful |
| On March 9th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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wow, that is really good and yet sad, yet inspirational all at the same time. |
| On March 9th 2008 Darkenedsoul21 Said : | |
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Wow!! Nice I really enojoyed this and I think if there were more people like you or the person you met in the hospital ( strength wise) I think the world would have a better chance in understanding each other!! Great work!! |
| On March 7th 2008 fallingforher Said : | |
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very good |
| On March 7th 2008 craxychik Said : | |
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i love it very flowing and beautiful!!!♫ |
| On March 7th 2008 lovesthestars Said : | |
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OMG GREAT! loved it! Kmp if you make more! |


