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For the girl I met in the hospital

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Goodbye

Views (194) Tragedy Created on 3-7-08 Flag
God took you away.
It doesn't seem fair,
but in the back of my mind,
you will always be there.

You weren't a close friend,
but our paths did cross,
and your absence in this world,
is to me a great loss.

You were too young to die, and
too innocent to feel that pain.
Only heaven benefits,
because you it has now gained.

I may think of you a little less
with each passing day,
but your strength is something I won't forget,
you have changed me in a way.

I wish for you eternal peace;
that's what you deserve my friend.
I hope I lead my life well enough
to meet up with you in the end.
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On March 17th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s so beautiful
On March 16th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 everything that needed to be said was said so beautifully and in good order this is great!
On March 16th 2008 atomicrebirth Said :
atomicrebirth That's so beautiful.=)
On March 15th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful
On March 9th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol wow, that is really good and yet sad, yet inspirational all at the same time.
On March 9th 2008 Darkenedsoul21 Said :
Darkenedsoul21 Wow!! Nice I really enojoyed this and I think if there were more people like you or the person you met in the hospital ( strength wise) I think the world would have a better chance in understanding each other!! Great work!!
On March 7th 2008 fallingforher Said :
my picture
very good
On March 7th 2008 craxychik Said :
craxychik i love it very flowing and beautiful!!!♫
On March 7th 2008 lovesthestars Said :
lovesthestars OMG GREAT! loved it! Kmp if you make more!