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When I Will Escape
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Created on 3-6-08
- What is the matter with me?Where did I go wrong?
- All I know my life has been like this for so long
- Why do you torture me?Why do I feel this pain?
- All I feel is the hatred that I gain.
- How do I escape?When will I be free?
- The many things I ask myself when you're beating me.
- When will I be rescued?How much longer will you torture me for?
- Because now it seems you will destroy me until I breathe no more.
Please Login to post comments| On May 27th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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This is great. Even though I haven't ever had to deal with something like this I can still feel the emotion. Love this one. |
| On March 26th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said : | |
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Beautiful. I feel for you, I've had a stepdad pass. |
| On March 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is so emotional. It's really good still. I like it :) |
| On March 16th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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love this |
| On March 6th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Love the emotion. |
| On March 6th 2008 kesaia1029 Said : | |
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Sorry everyone accidently scrolled down on title.It is really called Breathe No More. |
