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I wrote this for my mom when 10

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Views (1191) Haiku Created on 3-30-07 Flag

I wish someday someone would love me

I wish that someone would be you

I wish someday someone would love me

too bad wishes don't come true

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On April 27th 2008 savannahlynnk Said :
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a haiku isnt that long!
On March 21st 2008 Kennarrrrs Said :
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I'm 11 right now.. And JUSSt turned 11.. and Let me tell you I am a emotional person.. But that is a really Good Poem, Not quiet a Haiku, But I love it. It is Really Good. and When your 10 you can relize that your parents dont love you.. people that are younger take that kind of offensivley if you just say that they dont know what shit can happen to you.. but In reality.. We know whats going on around us.. We arent really 'little' kids anymore.. o.o
On November 6th 2007 HalfPint162 Said :
HalfPint162 that's really cute
On October 18th 2007 pretty6pink Said :
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awe. thats cute..
On October 18th 2007 pretty6pink Said :
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awe. thats cute..
On July 25th 2007 Babydollface45 Said :
Babydollface45 its a good poem for a 10 yr old but a bad haiku
On July 25th 2007 Babydollface45 Said :
Babydollface45 A haiku is 5 7 5 the fisrt line is 5 syllables and the 2nd one is 7 and then the last line is 5 agin got it
On June 27th 2007 xoxdanicaxox Said :
xoxdanicaxox oh wow, thats soo good!
On June 21st 2007 Aangairbender Said :
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im 9 ^^ sure its not a haiku,but its a neat poem anyway
On May 5th 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter nice work
On March 30th 2007 ivy81 Said :
ivy81 and its deff not a haiku
On March 30th 2007 ivy81 Said :
ivy81 thats kinda nasty to write to your mom your really saying I wish someone would love me cuz you dont at 10 I doubt you even knew your mom couldnt love you
On March 30th 2007 hyperhawk111 Said :
hyperhawk111 wow i agree .. its utterly simplistic and yet u got the emotions across perfectly, great poem is all i can reallky say
On March 30th 2007 urboysgirl Said :
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Hey this is like really good for being 10yrs old !!!! Like you should keep writing!
On March 30th 2007 eotcrocks Said :
eotcrocks Aw. For a ten yr old, that's good. And deep.
On March 30th 2007 babygurlj6 Said :
babygurlj6 aww its so cute i luv it
On March 30th 2007 melbox0304 Said :
melbox0304 When I was 10 I wasnt even having emotions yet.This is really good.
On March 30th 2007 Nickels18 Said :
Nickels18 wow! this poem really relates to me and it is wonderful! great job!
On March 30th 2007 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah wow, really good fr a 10 year old.
On March 30th 2007 onaipwolf Said :
onaipwolf This is very well-written, especially for a 10 year old. I agree with omgitsmeakasey, write some more!
On March 30th 2007 omgitsmekasey4 Said :
omgitsmekasey4 This is a really cool poem! I loved it! Write more, i enjoy them lots.