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Wrote this for english, i liked it...

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Romeo


I met the most beautiful girl yesterday,

I asked her to dance, and she said okay.

We had such a great time, I put my hands on her hips,

And when the music was over I stole one sweet kiss.

The night was not over, I stayed by her side,

We planned out our future, how she'd be my bride.

But today that sweet kiss, it feels oh so bitter

My family, and hers, both think I should quit her.

But I can't and I won't, I love her to death.

I'll ignore their rude gestures, or neglect needed breath.


By: Keegan Porter

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On March 19th 2008 m3gG1e9o0 Said :
m3gG1e9o0 it's really good! i didn't know you wrote poetry!
On March 19th 2008 keegan17 Said :
keegan17 hey shutup this only took me like 10 minutes and i didnt ask for yo help! lol
On March 18th 2008 Toxxicduck Said :
Toxxicduck and it took you about 3 hours to write. At least thats when you finished after you whined to me about helping you...Which I didnt...
On March 18th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Wow...I like it!
On March 18th 2008 keegan17 Said :
keegan17 i like the last two lines the most...
On March 17th 2008 llamangos4eva Said :
llamangos4eva wow... short but amazing. This is very well written. Congrats.