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Wrote this for english, i liked it...Rate this Poem
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Romeo
Romeo
I met the most beautiful girl yesterday,
I asked her to dance, and she said okay.
We had such a great time, I put my hands on her hips,
And when the music was over I stole one sweet kiss.
The night was not over, I stayed by her side,
We planned out our future, how she'd be my bride.
But today that sweet kiss, it feels oh so bitter
My family, and hers, both think I should quit her.
But I can't and I won't, I love her to death.
I'll ignore their rude gestures, or neglect needed breath.
By: Keegan Porter
| On March 19th 2008 m3gG1e9o0 Said : | |
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it's really good! i didn't know you wrote poetry! |
| On March 19th 2008 keegan17 Said : | |
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hey shutup this only took me like 10 minutes and i didnt ask for yo help! lol |
| On March 18th 2008 Toxxicduck Said : | |
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and it took you about 3 hours to write. At least thats when you finished after you whined to me about helping you...Which I didnt... |
| On March 18th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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Wow...I like it! |
| On March 18th 2008 keegan17 Said : | |
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i like the last two lines the most... |
| On March 17th 2008 llamangos4eva Said : | |
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wow... short but amazing. This is very well written. Congrats. |


