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GrRrRrRrR i wrote this lolRate this Poem
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ummmm wtf |
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so i was saved |
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up urs |
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I am your sacrifice |
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lust or love? |
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my world |
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no sense |
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my flaws |
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Hate |
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Recollection |
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Struggling |
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thinking |
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not a poem, a philosiphy..... |
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philosiphy # 2 |
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philosiphy # 3 |
I am your sacrifice
U must be out of ur mind
this was a simple design
u fuck it up everytime
how could u leave me behind
now im alone once again
shut the fuck up it just pain
i dont need to friends to be tamed
i hate just gitting the blame
i am the one whos fault
has caused a grain of salt
in pain, of a chocolate malt
i drown my pain in taste
of delicious cultured maste
and cocoa in a drink
i even asked the shrink
from down teh lane
she told me i was not the cause of my pain
i didnt beleive her
i dont even know her
i listened with my ears
they were clears
of my pain its outcomes.
a sorrowfull bottom
i listened with my heart
and got hurt
my friends understand what i mean
but u have made ur point clear
yelled it in my ear
i tried my best
but got the worst
no i pay the price
i am ur sacrifice.
| On July 11th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said : | |
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i have no idea wat to say bout it...i love the poem.....i just dont no wat to say. |


