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so i was saved
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Created on 7-8-07
towns are really scarin the children
they found away to take the candy away
villages are even worse for the children
they always have to work no play.
electronics were developed
all the kids times were enveloped
by the constant need for more.
reminds ppl like me of a whore.
but then again, u need money for that
its stuff u have to work for
i hate it like u do
but at least i always get a pat
on my back for doing work
the feeling of happiness
is worth more than money in its solitaryness
consuming the hearts of those who sit and play
all day........
Please Login to post comments| On July 8th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said : | |
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Very descirtive even though the whore part was not nessisary. lol |
