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save yourself this mistake,my heartbreakRate this Poem
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Screaming |
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Breaking me down |
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Quietness |
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Life ain't livin' |
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Perfect Dream |
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Fake Love |
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Get away from me |
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Recognition |
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My hopeful elation |
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Fake Love
will you stay with me
will you always be mine
i wish i would hear
the words i know aren't right on time
better late than never
well never is already here
and you're still speechless
what am I supposed to do my dear
i'll wait forever if I have to
I wish what I want to say would be true
but i can't keep myself waiting
for what you never knew
could always be yours
and always was
but you had your chance
so give some applause
for the guy that tried everything
and so he undied
he wasn't so cunning
for himself he cried
"Why did I miss my chance
for the girl I was depraved
my heart wasn't where
my strenght should have saved"
sorry to tell you honey
but no man will ever admit
he was wrong for you
he'd rather just hit
your cheek and hope
to god you'll cry
Walk a tightrope
and maybe dive
save yourself
from this horrible mistake
a horrible future
please get away from this heartbreak
| On March 9th 2008 Joshikins666 Said : | |
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i like it...its really good |
| On February 26th 2008 autumnsomer Said : | |
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This was a great poem. I absolutely feel it. |
| On February 25th 2008 katkent15 Said : | |
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"walk a tightrope/ and maybe dive" that was a typo, it was supposed to say "die" |


