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Slow Dance

Views (239) Envy Created on 5-9-07 Flag

Have you ever watched kids  

On a merry-go round

Or listened to the rain

Slapping on the ground

Ever followed a butterflies erractic flight  

Or gazed at the sun into the fading night    

You better slow down

Don't dance too fast

Time is short 

The music won't last

Do you run through each day on the fly

When you ask "how are you?"

Do you hear the reply?

When the day is done

Do you lie in your bed

With the next hundred chores running through your head

You better slow down

Don't dance too fast

Time is short

The music won't last

Ever told a child we'll do it tomorrow

And in your haste, not seen his sorrow

Ever lost touch

Let a good friendship die

Because you never had the time to call and say "hi"

You better slow down

Don't dance too fast

Time is short

The music won't last 

When you run so fast to get somewhere

You miss half the fun of getting there

When you worry and hurry through your day

Its like an unopened gift thrown away

Life is NOT a race

DO take it slower

Listen to the music

Before the song is over 

 

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On June 15th 2007 cuteness66 Said :
cuteness66 this is so good.. if you are a senior in high school i would find a way to be a speaker at graduation and use that in my speech because thats what we should do in life.. if we grow up to fast we will forget to live for the moment and we be grumpy for the rest of our lives.. you get props.. or kudos watevers good for you..
On June 4th 2007 PattyFannin Said :
PattyFannin I gave it a thumbs up anyway because I don't know who's it is.
On June 4th 2007 PattyFannin Said :
PattyFannin I like this very much and have read it before somewhere on testriffic. I don't remember where.
On May 22nd 2007 kassidy21 Said :
kassidy21 Its a poem...
On May 22nd 2007 ANNO22 Said :
ANNO22 this is really good
On May 9th 2007 carcrazygrrl Said :
carcrazygrrl Excellent food for thought. Great job, I love it.
On May 9th 2007 kassidy21 Said :
kassidy21 This is about taking things one step at a time...There is no need in rushing through life...take the time to appreciate the little things and you will realize what you were missing out on all this time...This was written by the man I love after he returned from his 3rd deployment and he realized how he was missing out on the little things on life and he has changed and become a better man and partner because of it. When you read this just think about the things you do and how you do them. Do you try to hurry things and worry alot? If so, really there is no need to. Take your life just a baby step at a time; you will get there when the time is right and will have wonderful experiences and memories as you get there. Kassidy