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Slow Dance
Have you ever watched kids
On a merry-go round
Or listened to the rain
Slapping on the ground
Ever followed a butterflies erractic flight
Or gazed at the sun into the fading night
You better slow down
Don't dance too fast
Time is short
The music won't last
Do you run through each day on the fly
When you ask "how are you?"
Do you hear the reply?
When the day is done
Do you lie in your bed
With the next hundred chores running through your head
You better slow down
Don't dance too fast
Time is short
The music won't last
Ever told a child we'll do it tomorrow
And in your haste, not seen his sorrow
Ever lost touch
Let a good friendship die
Because you never had the time to call and say "hi"
You better slow down
Don't dance too fast
Time is short
The music won't last
When you run so fast to get somewhere
You miss half the fun of getting there
When you worry and hurry through your day
Its like an unopened gift thrown away
Life is NOT a race
DO take it slower
Listen to the music
Before the song is over
| On June 15th 2007 cuteness66 Said : | |
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this is so good.. if you are a senior in high school i would find a way to be a speaker at graduation and use that in my speech because thats
what we should do in life.. if we grow up to fast we will forget to live for the moment and we be grumpy for the rest of our lives.. you get props..
or kudos watevers good for you.. |
| On June 4th 2007 PattyFannin Said : | |
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I gave it a thumbs up anyway because I don't know who's it is. |
| On June 4th 2007 PattyFannin Said : | |
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I like this very much and have read it before somewhere on testriffic. I don't remember where. |
| On May 22nd 2007 kassidy21 Said : | |
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Its a poem... |
| On May 22nd 2007 ANNO22 Said : | |
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this is really good |
| On May 9th 2007 carcrazygrrl Said : | |
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Excellent food for thought. Great job, I love it. |
| On May 9th 2007 kassidy21 Said : | |
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This is about taking things one step at a time...There is no need in rushing through life...take the time to appreciate the little things and you will realize what you were missing out on all this time...This was written by the man I love after he returned from his 3rd deployment and he realized how he was missing out on the little things on life and he has changed and become a better man and partner because of it. When you read this just think about the things you do and how you do them. Do you try to hurry things and worry alot? If so, really there is no need to. Take your life just a baby step at a time; you will get there when the time is right and will have wonderful experiences and memories as you get there.
Kassidy |


