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Created on 7-23-07
TRYING TO MOVE ON JUST ONE MORE NIGHT
GETTING THROUGH THE DAY WITHOUT A FIGHT
NOT WANTING TO BE HERE ANYMORE
ALWAYS LOOKING FOR SOME THING MORE
IN LIFE THERES DEATH
AND DAY THERES NIGHT
HOLDING ONTO MYSELF TIGHT
TRYING TO MAKE THROUGH THE PAIN
WISHING THAT I COULD ONCE BE SANE
MOVING ON ONCE AGAIN
WITHOUT YOU FOR NOW UNTILL WE MEET AGAIN
Please Login to post comments| On August 1st 2008 speederspider Said : | |
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well it's got good emotion but not the greatest talent really. |
| On July 1st 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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wonderful |
| On April 24th 2008 audica Said : | |
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i love it. i really do. |
| On April 6th 2008 Kymburleighx3 Said : | |
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You can feel the passion in it, but I think you have a little typo. Other than that, it's very great. |
| On April 4th 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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sad.. describes myself :|.. very nice! |
| On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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This was really good! |
| On February 27th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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this is great, i love the wording! |
| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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this is really good...the lines "IN LIFE THERES DEATH
AND DAY THERES NIGHT" really stand out to me for some reason haha good poem! |
| On August 9th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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this poem is very telling,, or is it?? either way great job...:) |
| On August 1st 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like this one-there is a sort of desperation in your words.... |
