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LIFES SUICIDE
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Created on 7-13-07
LIFE OR SUICIDE IS THE QUESTION WHY
TO LIVE TO DIE
TO BE ALIVE
THINKING WHERES MY PLACE IN TIME
IN THIS WORLD I LIVE
IN TIS PLACE I DREAM
WHAT MAKES IT SPIN
WHAT MAKES ME BREATH
TO LIVE ALIFE OF PAIN
IS JUST LIKE DYING EVERYDAY
SO WHICH ROAD TO CHOOSE
I DONT KNOW DO YOU
Please Login to post comments| On July 1st 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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you have a way with words your poems are great and speak to alot of people |
| On May 1st 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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omg!i love this! |
| On April 24th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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it's good but again it could be better. Keep up the good work. |
| On April 24th 2008 audica Said : | |
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another one of my faves. |
| On April 7th 2008 sweetkelli16 Said : | |
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wow this is good... its really deep i like that you don't rhyme... amazing poem!! |
| On April 4th 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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very deep. love it. |
| On March 16th 2008 emoxMCRx4ever Said : | |
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I like this one the most!!! |
| On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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This is good, deep and has a person questioning ... I like that in a poem! |
| On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I agree with HumanF17TH, but it's really great and really thought provoking. |
| On February 27th 2008 pjjustin Said : | |
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awesome man i loved everyword you must of been deeply committed to this great job |
| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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deep....i think this would be better with out the last line only because it sounds more serious..but thats just my opinion....this is really good! |
