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Created on 7-7-07
ITS THE PAIN I KEEP INSIDE
WITH NO PLACE TO GO
AND NO PLACE TO HIDE
MY SANITY IS WHAT KEEPS ME HERE
WITH ALL THE TAERS
AND ALL MY FEARS
GOING RUNNING TRYING TO HIDE
WITH ONLY ONEPLACE DEEP INSIDE
I FEEL SAFE HERE DEEP INSIDE
MY MIND MY THOUGHTS MY SOUL AND PRIDE
MAKING A WISH THAT MAY COME TRUE
TO BE WITH YOU AND NOTHING NEW
Please Login to post comments| On July 1st 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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so far there is nothing I dont like.... |
| On June 25th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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provo! i love it |
| On June 18th 2008 blah2blah Said : | |
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i really like the structure of this and how he ending was def unpredictable. simply amazing. |
| On June 17th 2008 5cheychey5 Said : | |
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i like it. very sweet |
| On April 23rd 2008 audica Said : | |
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my fave (so far) i love it!! |
| On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Ooo I like!! |
| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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i like this one a lot...its really good |
