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here comes the rain
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Created on 6-25-07
WHEN IT RAIN IT POURS
LIFE IS SUCH A BORE
GOING THROUGH DAY BY DAY
NOT LOOKING ANY WAY
THINKING OF LIFE STILL HERE TODAY
WAITING FOR A SIGN TO STAY
WHEN IT POURS IT RAINS
HERE IT COMES
WAIT FOR NOW
IM ALMOST DONE
THINKING ABOUT THE WAY ILL DIE
WAITING JUST WAITING TRYING TO SURVIVE
ILL LEAVE WITH THIS ONE LAST LINE
WHEN IT POURS IT RAINS HOPE EVERYTHING IS FINE
Please Login to post comments| On July 1st 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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good |
| On June 17th 2008 5cheychey5 Said : | |
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it was nice. |
| On April 23rd 2008 audica Said : | |
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i liked the ending -the last two lines- |
| On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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i love the rain to me it is the way our Mother crys to wash away the pain of some. good poem! |
| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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good poem... i always like poems about rain too : P |
| On February 20th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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wow this is an amazing poem. I love it. I love poems about rain. metaphorically or not. great writing style too. |
| On July 18th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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nice poem nd the rain is boring |
| On June 28th 2007 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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if you read this let me know what you think please |
