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TOUCH OF AN ANGEL
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Created on 5-5-07
AS I SIT HERE THINKNING ABOUT THE TIMES
WHEN YOU WHERE RIGHT HERE BESIDE MY SIDE
THINKING ABOUT ALL THE DAYS GOING BY
WHEN YOU LEFT IT MADE ME CRY
ALL I COULD SAY WAS GOD WHY
I CRIED AND CRIED AND CRIED
WHEN YOU LEFT I COULD HEAR THE WIND
BLOWING AROUND SAYING THINGS
THE ONLY THING I REMEBER FROM THAT DAY
IS I WAS INSIDE MY ROOM THINKNIG OF YOU
NO WINDOWS OPEN WITH NOTHING TO DO
WITH A PICTURE OF YOU IN HAND
THERE WAS A TOUCH OF AN ANGEL TO MY HAND
Please Login to post comments| On June 28th 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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touching..... |
| On April 24th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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it's ok but it could be better. |
| On April 16th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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it definetly needs more work, but great style |
| On March 11th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I really think you could improve your writing, if you would use punctuation, your writing could be so much better, but if this is a signature style you are trying to go for, then more power to ya, Excellent Poem |
| On August 2nd 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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The last line is so sweet-I love the thought! |
| On July 18th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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nice poem |
| On May 5th 2007 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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