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MY HEART

Views (231) Love Created on 2-25-07 Flag

TIDES OF THE OCEAN RISES HIGH

AS THOUGHTS OF YOU LIE DEEP INSIDE

INSIDE MY HEART AND IN MY SOUL

SEARCHING FOR A PLACE TO GO

AS RAIN DROPS FROM THE SKY

MANY TEARS FALL FROM MY EYES

STILL NOT KNOWING WHAT TO DO

I CANT KEEP MY MIND OFF FROM YOU

A DAY WILL COME AND I WILL KNOW

BUT IF ITS TO LATE WHO WILL KNOW

AS TIDE FALLS AND RAIN CLEARS

MY HEART WEAKENS WITH EVERY BEAT

SITTING HERE TRYING TO SURVIVE

WITH OR WITHOUT YOU I STILL TRY

MAYBE SOME DAY MY DREAM WILL COME TRUE

AND I WILL HAVE YOU

 

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On August 29th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 I like it a lot!!!
On June 28th 2008 lisajo1979 Said :
lisajo1979 That was awsome;)
On June 17th 2008 jessi9509runit Said :
jessi9509runit I really liked it and enjoyed reading that, you have a great talent and i hope you dont discontinue writing
On April 23rd 2008 audica Said :
audica love it!
On April 23rd 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said :
xxXrareloveXx wow, goosebumps!
On April 16th 2008 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 its ok, better than most, but ok, i like it
On April 6th 2008 emorockgrl333 Said :
emorockgrl333 awwww... ♥
On April 4th 2008 keegan4606 Said :
keegan4606 :'( again describes me.. my favorite!
On March 11th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very good, but has potential to be even better, punctiation would help add to the rythym. very good
On February 27th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said :
teeniegirl015 i like this :)
On February 19th 2008 NLS101 Said :
NLS101 tragic.. very good I like it :)
On August 1st 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I really liked the way that you used the ocean tides and the rain in this one~
On March 4th 2007 jwoody1980 Said :
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hey comment my poem please