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Created on 2-25-07
TIDES OF THE OCEAN RISES HIGH
AS THOUGHTS OF YOU LIE DEEP INSIDE
INSIDE MY HEART AND IN MY SOUL
SEARCHING FOR A PLACE TO GO
AS RAIN DROPS FROM THE SKY
MANY TEARS FALL FROM MY EYES
STILL NOT KNOWING WHAT TO DO
I CANT KEEP MY MIND OFF FROM YOU
A DAY WILL COME AND I WILL KNOW
BUT IF ITS TO LATE WHO WILL KNOW
AS TIDE FALLS AND RAIN CLEARS
MY HEART WEAKENS WITH EVERY BEAT
SITTING HERE TRYING TO SURVIVE
WITH OR WITHOUT YOU I STILL TRY
MAYBE SOME DAY MY DREAM WILL COME TRUE
AND I WILL HAVE YOU
Please Login to post comments| On August 29th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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I like it a lot!!! |
| On June 28th 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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That was awsome;) |
| On June 17th 2008 jessi9509runit Said : | |
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I really liked it and enjoyed reading that, you have a great talent and i hope you dont discontinue writing |
| On April 23rd 2008 audica Said : | |
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love it! |
| On April 23rd 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said : | |
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wow, goosebumps! |
| On April 16th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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its ok, better than most, but ok, i like it |
| On April 6th 2008 emorockgrl333 Said : | |
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awwww... ♥ |
| On April 4th 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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:'( again describes me.. my favorite! |
| On March 11th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very good, but has potential to be even better, punctiation would help add to the rythym. very good |
| On February 27th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said : | |
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i like this :) |
| On February 19th 2008 NLS101 Said : | |
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tragic.. very good I like it :) |
| On August 1st 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I really liked the way that you used the ocean tides and the rain in this one~ |
| On March 4th 2007 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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hey comment my poem please |
