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Created on 2-25-07
Lost sitting here beside myself
Looking for you and no one else
Lost inside my head and soul
Looking for a way to go
Lost here just looking away
Thinking of all the things I should say
Who will be me if im not me
Thinking always who I should be
Maybe one day you will see
What kind of team we could be
Please Login to post comments| On August 5th 2008 OtherBlacky Said : | |
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I like this alot. |
| On August 1st 2008 speederspider Said : | |
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yeah I'd give up on that one right now. |
| On June 30th 2008 curkaxboo Said : | |
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wow.
thats really good!
ive felt like that before. |
| On June 28th 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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I have felt that b4....love the way you put it... |
| On June 22nd 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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this is so cool.you should write more. |
| On June 20th 2008 ToothpickQueen Said : | |
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thats really good. nice. |
| On May 1st 2008 Ihatemyself13 Said : | |
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Wow...I like it. It very good flow. :) I love it. |
| On May 1st 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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this is good. |
| On April 24th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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it's good |
| On April 23rd 2008 Aleera00 Said : | |
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This is good. |
| On April 23rd 2008 audica Said : | |
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love it! |
| On April 23rd 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said : | |
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nice job! |
| On April 23rd 2008 Darkenedsoul21 Said : | |
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I think its good. Nice job |
| On April 17th 2008 petersonsv Said : | |
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It needs work but it's pretty good |
| On April 16th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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well, i think it is good, but could use some work, but hey, so does every one else, especially mine, lol |
| On April 9th 2008 deafone Said : | |
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do you really need to ask if good or bad why not just ask your double yourteamate your self.. you know its good something i have learned in life is who better to be your best friend then yourself...i too sit lost in my world talking to who better than my double... |
| On April 7th 2008 sweetkelli16 Said : | |
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i'm really starting to like ur poems... they're the way im feeling right now and thats weird but great poem |
| On March 11th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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interesting |
| On March 8th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Who will be me if im not me? GREAT LINE! |
| On March 7th 2008 giedinghagen90 Said : | |
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pretty good. really undersatnd the feeling of being lost. |
| On February 26th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I think this is good! It makes me stand back and think. Great job! |
| On February 19th 2008 NLS101 Said : | |
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I really like this, good flow :) |
| On July 5th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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This is good but I'm unclear on the meaning..Is it about someone wanting you to change to be with them |
| On April 15th 2007 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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comments please good or bad |
| On March 26th 2007 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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comments please |
