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PAIN

I CRY

Views (582) Pain Created on 4-5-08 Flag

I TRY TO HIDE THE PAIN INSIDE

THE FEARS I HAVE

THE TEARS I CRY

THE WAY YOU USE TO LOOK AT ME

THE WAY MY HEART USE TO BEAT

AROUND YOU BESIDE YOU INBETWEEN

I SEEK THAT PLACE I WANT TO BE

DARKNESS FALLS AND CLOUDS ROLL IN

TEARS COME DOWN THAT NEVER END

MY HEART SINKS DEEP WITHIN

ALL ALONE ILL NEVER SIN

I CRY THESE TEARS ALL ALONE

BY MYSELF NO ONE HOME

 

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On August 5th 2008 OtherBlacky Said :
OtherBlacky Deep Stuff.
On July 7th 2008 lisajo1979 Said :
lisajo1979 so much heart in this on jermey
On June 25th 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs this is my fave.
On June 18th 2008 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah the begining and the ending were both really strong, which is very important to the readers. i truely enjoyed reading this, and hope for some new ones.
On June 17th 2008 5cheychey5 Said :
5cheychey5 hey, i rally like it i've felt like that. thats so sad.
On June 8th 2008 Naturegr1 Said :
Naturegr1 Ive felt this way good words and simple to!
On June 1st 2008 cynt2009 Said :
my picture
very good
On May 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Wow, this is really insane. You pretty much pegged what I've been feeling over the last two weeks or so, and I'm loving the way that you put it into words.
On May 5th 2008 Ihatemyself13 Said :
Ihatemyself13 wow...i love it. :)
On May 1st 2008 horrorqueenusa Said :
horrorqueenusa GOOD JOB!
On April 30th 2008 RalRasper Said :
RalRasper Yeah good work, around you beside you in between, I seek that place i want to be, i like how that flows and it makes sense good job.
On April 26th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 aww, i love it... i know how u feel!!
On April 24th 2008 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 You did a great Job J!!!!!
On April 24th 2008 audica Said :
audica totally a major fave of mine, this is awesome!!
On April 22nd 2008 allizawesome Said :
allizawesome I so know what that feels like... this was beautiful. my favorite line is: "THE WAY YOU USE TO LOOK AT ME THE WAY MY HEART USE TO BEAT"
On April 22nd 2008 emogirlly100 Said :
emogirlly100 aww sad *hug* hopefully your better (if the poem is actually wat you feel inside)
On April 21st 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 its beautful
On April 21st 2008 HeartBroken166 Said :
HeartBroken166 I like it...I like the rhyme pattern. Nice job.
On April 20th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 not sure why people arent reading ur poems...i like this...perhaps just send the request to those who have liked ur works before....but dont just be like a stranger to them. break the ice and try to develop some sort of rapport. a brief intro wont hurt....nice poem.
On April 18th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 Awesome poem :P
On April 17th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very good
On April 17th 2008 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx i really like this lots :D it really explains the feeling of being lonely quite well :] great job
On April 16th 2008 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 this is your best work, at least i think, its good, great, you are slowly improving
On April 16th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao very simple but very good
On April 13th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth I like this. Great job.