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Created on 3-3-08
LOST ALONE BROKEN PAIN
THESE ARE WORDS I FEEL
THIS IS THE PAIN I LIVE
TODAY TONIGHT TOMORROW GOODBYE
TO LIVE TO DIE TO BE OR TO CRY
THESE ARE THE THOUGHTS ROLLING THROUGH MY MIND
MYSELF ALONE TEARS I CRY
TRYING NOT TO SAY GOODBYE
HEAR TODAY GONE TONIGHT
TRYING TO MAKE IT THROUGH ONE MORE FIGHT
AT LAST ALONE BY MYSELF
NO PAIN NO MORE TEARS NO SELF PITTY NO MORE FEARS
THIS IS WHAT I FEEL WHEN IM DEAD
Please Login to post comments| On July 7th 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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very good at exspressing it all |
| On April 24th 2008 audica Said : | |
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love it! |
| On April 20th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i have to agree with gonzo...not being discouraging at all...this is a very good poem and i'm not one of those people who'll trash it because of a lack of comma's...i understood the flow u had so it's all good. not bad here not bad at all. |
| On April 18th 2008 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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Very good, you can feel the emotion almost. :) |
| On April 6th 2008 emorockgrl333 Said : | |
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mhmmm! ♥ |
| On April 5th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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Very well written will done! |
| On April 4th 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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love it. your a great writer! |
| On March 24th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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this is good |
| On March 18th 2008 comacozi101 Said : | |
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love it. deep and emotional. tell me when you post some more. |
| On March 12th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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this is really good : ) |
| On March 8th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This is very good. Sad that death had to be the way out of it all though. :( |
| On March 5th 2008 California1516 Said : | |
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holy crap..this is amazingly written..it flows superly smoothly!!:) |
| On March 4th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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the lack of punctuation made it dificult to establish any type of rythym, but the words definitely have some feeling to them, good work |
| On March 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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well structured, good word placement enhanced the emotions. well done! |
| On March 3rd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Good choice of words. |
| On March 3rd 2008 pjjustin Said : | |
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i like it i thought it was well wrote and had a good order of words and emotions put in the right places |
