jwoody1980

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Created on 10-8-07

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DO YOU REMEMBER WHEN WE WHERE YOUNG

THE TIME TOGETHER

ALL THE FUN

DO YOU REMEMBER THE DAY I DIED

THE KISS YOU GAVE

THE LAST GOODBYE

DO YOU REMEMBER THE TIME WE SHARED

THE WAY I LOVED YOU

THE WAY I PLAYED WITH YOUR HAIR

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On May 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said :

	I liked this, but I think that you could've added a lot more and made it a truly great poem.

On April 24th 2008 audica Said :

	i like it, but i thik it could've been longer and the ending could've been more powerful...

On April 23rd 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said :

	i like it! it has a good flow.

On April 17th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :

	ehhh...coulda been better, kinda dropped off at the end, but was good til then

On April 8th 2008 Xpoetxgurlx Said :

	wow this makes me cry just cause its so sweet lol amazing job

On April 5th 2008 stef4732 Said :

	Wow i got teared up on that one lol

On April 4th 2008 keegan4606 Said :

	love it. made me tear up :( :) but very good.

On March 8th 2008 allizawesome Said :

	I really liked the verses, but I think the part "DO YOU REMEMBER THE DAY I DIED THE KISS YOU GAVE THE LAST GOODBYE" would have gone better at the end to make it feel more concluded, but other then that it was really touching.

On March 8th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	I think we all wonder if anyone will remember us after we're gone. Was our life meaningful or forgettable. You achieved this point to ponder in very few words. Great job!

On March 1st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :

	its good but i think it needs more it feels unfinished or maybe its just the order i dont know just feels like it needs more still good poem so far

On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said :

	So much said in so few words, Loved it really touching!

On February 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said :

	This is preety good! Don't change a thing!

On February 28th 2008 Bexi93 Said :

	short and sweet and it is said tht not all the best poems had to be long, just like flanders feild by John MaCrea

On February 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	I like this lots. It's really sweet. Good writing~ ash

On February 20th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said :

	that's adorable. i like the shortness and pointedness it has to it. it's amazing.

On February 19th 2008 NLS101 Said :

	I love the last line lol though if someone tried playing with my hair they would lose their fingers.... lol! good poem

On October 15th 2007 sis1012005 Said :

	awww thats so cute! I LOVE IT! being young was so great lol! ~Sylvia

On October 9th 2007 chicawhatwhatb Said :

	Differant perspective, short and to the point, I do like it. It leaves you hanging, which depending on the reader can be good or bad. I like that it leaves it hanging, cause it gives you a chance to apply it to your own life and remember maybe other experiences the reader might have. Great Job,, don't forget to check out some of my new postings!