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Created on 8-1-07
HERE TODAY GONE TOMORROW
FEEL IT RAIN
I HEAR THE PAIN
FLYING THROW AIR
GOING NOWHERE
FEEL IT RAIN
I HEAR THE PAIN
HEART BREAKING
HEAR THE NOISE
LIFES MAKING
ALL THE TOYS
NO MORE AIR
NO MORE CARES
FEEL THE RAIN
I HEAR THE PAIN
Please Login to post comments| On July 1st 2008 lisajo1979 Said : | |
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you can almost feel the words to this poem.. |
| On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Differant but still good! |
| On February 28th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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love it |
| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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woah...love it! |
| On February 20th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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I love the repition. it's perfectly plased so that it doesn't make it boring or predictable. it's an overall great poem. |
| On August 7th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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yea atcually good i like this especially the repitition |
