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Graduation |
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Taking it Slow |
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Amo tu (i love you) |
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Spelling Love/Luv |
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Taking Too Long I |
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Taking Too Long II |
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Definition of perfect |
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Taking Too Long III |
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Taking Too Long IV |
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Taking Too Long V |
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Taking Too Long VI |
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Taking Too Long VII |
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Smile |
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Smile II |
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What is rejection? |
Taking Too Long III
Why you should be with me
In the beginning, I came to love you
But I couldn’t tell if you loved me too.
I took too long, searching and waiting
Or maybe too fast, when I asked would you date me
But the point is your answer, you didn’t mean to hurt
You said while we were walking
That with a boy you were talking
It turns out I was too late
In my mind resolving the debate
But you said you still liked me
And you’d say yes if you were free.
So I continued on in life
Getting rid of my pain and strife
And all the while I was by your side.
When you got dumped and needed to cry.
By this time, I still loved you so
But I was afraid of another no
I waited, debated and appreciated,
Too long, as another boy you dated.
I don’t know how many boys you went through.
I shouldn’t have waited, I could’ve been number 2
But as the third and fourth went by, all the while
I was the one that made you smile.
Now finally you’re free, but I’m too shy to see
Its my opportunity, to ask you to be with me
It must be coincidence, that you came to me with a kiss
On the same night I watched, the stars and made a wish.
I’ve taken too long, it’s my last chance
I ask you once more, for a life of romance.
| On December 28th 2006 jvhuggard Said : | |
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this poem was my best at the time i wrote it..which was may 2006...it was so good it actually got the girl i was talkin bout to say yes to me... that lasted 2 days sadly.... |


