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my first poem september 2005Rate this Poem
My Poems
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Graduation |
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22
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Taking it Slow |
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Amo tu (i love you) |
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Spelling Love/Luv |
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Taking Too Long I |
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Taking Too Long II |
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Definition of perfect |
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Taking Too Long III |
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Taking Too Long IV |
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Taking Too Long V |
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Taking Too Long VI |
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Taking Too Long VII |
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Smile |
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Smile II |
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What is rejection? |
Amo tu (i love you)
Amar~to love
To have deep affections
Afraid of asking,
That one secret question
Do I love you? Not yet
Is it possible? Quite so
Do you feel the same way?
I really must know
To summon the forces
Of love and of courage
To be optimistic
And to feel the surge
When to ask you? Tomorrow
I'll do it the next day~
No I wont, I'll stick to it
I'll do it today
I see u in class
As I walk pass
How to break the ice..
Will your answer be nice?
The time goes by fast
I’m stuck in the past
As I watch you walk out
The door past the trash
Where the poem I wrote lies
With the truth deep inside
I run to confront you
You turn round surprised
Now is the moment
The question flows through me
I wait for your answer
You nod your head slowly..
| On June 22nd 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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this one is unique and I really like it~ |
| On December 28th 2006 horrorxpenguin Said : | |
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yeah its te amo. haha "As I watch you walk out
The door past the trash
" that was a desperate rhyme. but it was great. you mean @ CP or were you just saying something to rhyme? what do you mean not yet? you better love linda! omg >=I |
| On December 27th 2006 jvhuggard Said : | |
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supposedly its te amo instead of amo tu |


