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Old Emo Poem From Me

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WTF?!?!

Views (48) Pain Created on 3-18-08 Flag

What am i doing wrong,

I really love this girl,

Yet every time i seem to get close she pushes me away,

I dont know what to do anymore,

Why does she think my heart is a game,

Does she want to see how many times she can break it before i go insane?

Maybe i should just bleed myself dry,

Or put a bullet between my eyes,

Maybe if i did there would be no more pain,

Every day i seem to come closer o my end,

Is that what she wants,

To see me in pain,

To see me die,

To never have me in this world again? 

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On May 28th 2008 surferchic89 Said :
surferchic89 Poor thing, please try to write better poems...
On March 24th 2008 LBbaby2010 Said :
LBbaby2010 it seems like the girl just needs some time,just give her some time..then try again after a while
On March 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 i agree with seeker...in times like that all u can do is be true to urself.
On March 20th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Sometimes it's better to not try and figure out what other people think and want. Stick to your own side of the street and you'll be happier. :)
On March 19th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 some girls tend to push people away don't take it affensively (maybe she's having a hard time in life) but i like the poem
On March 19th 2008 tinkerbellbbw Said :
tinkerbellbbw wats dis 4???