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No More Laughs

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Created on 1-16-08

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Razor in my hand,

Sliding it across my wrists,

Feeling the life flow out of me,

Now laying in a pool of blood,

Many thoughts run in my mind,

Will anyone miss me,

Will anyone care,

I feel the end is near,

I'm turning cold,

I can't see,

I can't hear,

I can't breathe,

Finally I think,

There will be no more laughs about me.

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On May 28th 2008 surferchic89 Said :

	Mo Cherie please don't ever do this, promise me you won't ever go this far.... I would miss you and I would care.

On February 4th 2008 AlexINTJ Said :

	Very vivid and to the point. It doesn't have to be long to get it across. Wonderful poem and very sad. It's easy to relate to, but as already stated, with effort I believe things can get better. Once again, nice work :)

On January 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	Happiness is a choice! Breathe. Change your focus. You'll laugh again! tickle tickle