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To a girl that broke my heart

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I'm Not Perfect

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I hate my life,
All I wish is to die,
I tried not to break her heart,
And yet it was mine that ended up shattered,
I love her,
And I hope she can get over my looks,
I hate that I couldn't be better for her,
But I can't change how I look or feel,
I won't stop loving her,
I wish she had never seen me,
At least then I know we would still be together,
Then I could hear her say three words that make my heart stop,
That made my heart melt,
That made me feel invincible,
Those three words,
I love you,
Yet I feel it is over now,
My heart is broken again,
I don't know how much more I can take,
I don't know if there is any heart left to break,
I must ask God,
Why did he make me this way?
Why did he make me so ugly?
Why is it that the ones I give my heart to it always gets broken?
Why couldn't I be better for her?
That way I could for once be happy,
For once be in love,
For once have someone love me back,
For them to not care that I'm not perfect.
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On April 14th 2008 surferchic89 Said :
surferchic89 Ohh God, you made me cry with this, seriously, that is good, very heartfelt... Ohh wow I am still crying, this has alot of meaning to me, I just wish someone I know, maybe feels a little like this, then my pain won't be so bad, cause then I know he feels it too..... Way to go, keep writing!
On April 8th 2008 taffytoes Said :
taffytoes you dont have to be perfect. and love doesnt care what you look like. :)
On March 22nd 2008 19dudett92 Said :
19dudett92 aww, every one already said what i was gonna say... oh well i'll say it anyways... no is perfect, be proud of your self that you are you, looks don't count for shit when you really care about someone, writing can be a good outlet for these kinds of things, and can be a good why to show ppl about you when you're too chicken to say it your self... hehe that last ones a lil more bout me than the poem.. but good work
On March 20th 2008 megan876 Said :
megan876 wow i know how you feel thats how i have felt for a long ass time. and i hope that you find that person you care about.
On February 29th 2008 101091 Said :
101091 Great job. This... is extremely good.
On January 30th 2008 californiangrl Said :
californiangrl beautiful... I understand how that feels
On January 30th 2008 Aofiedammaira Said :
Aofiedammaira very nice poem. It expresses alot of feelings. As everyone else before me has said... nobody's perfect, and looks don't matter. Ever "ugly" child I know grew up to be really quite handsome. Maybe you'll be one of those! And all this is really just a test to see who your real friends are, and if that certain person really does love you. Any one can say that they love someone, but not everyone can mean it. If it was true love, then she'd be to blinded to see anything else.
On January 15th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth This is full of emotion and a great purge of those negative feelings. No one is perfect, nor better than another person and if they think they are then there in lies their character defect. lol Don't be so hard on yourself. The way we see ourselves will transmit to others and they will begin to see us that way. If your energy is "I'm not worthy" then the law of attraction will be that others will see you that way. Be confident in who you are, don't compare yourself to others, and I think you'll be pleased with the results. The greatest asset I've found from being comfortable in my own skin is this... Even if someone doesn't get who I am or what I am about...It doesn't wreck my world as happiness is an inside job. Great poem!!!
On January 14th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv Wow....I have lots I feel the need to express here. Bear with me. First and foremost--nobody's perfect. Second--looks TRULY don't matter when those three words you mentioned are really meant by the person saying them. Finally--I know what you're going through...if you're interested, I'll tell you my story. You're not ugly, and you seem nice....sounds to me like it was her loss. Not yours.