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Puddle of Tears
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Created on 4-19-07
If u dont luv me tell me cuz everytime i c u and her
my heart keeps on breakin and the pieces are fallin down
splashin in my puddle of tears makin the simplest of sounds
tap clash bang splash
my legs shakin makin me fall flat on my face
no1s there to help me up cuz ur gone wit her and no1 else cares
so ill just lie here in my puddle of tears untill u come bac to help me up
uh oh u've waited to long
as i gasph 4 air dont u dare try to save me
cuz ur the reason that i drowned in my puddle of tears...
Please Login to post comments| On May 23rd 2007 iluvlucas Said : | |
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this is awesome. i love knowing other people can feel the same way as i do |
| On April 24th 2007 Skyeee09 Said : | |
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I like this. |
