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I felt my husband with me last night.

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Goodmorning Heaven, Goodnight Hell.

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I feel you all around me,

As if you never left.

I feel your kind embrace,

I feel your warm, sweet breath.

I feel your ghostly hands,

touch me just like lace.

Wiping away a tear,

That has trickeled down my face.

I see your pale blue eyes,

Turn to charcoal grey.

Im looking up to God,

Thanking him for this day.

Then just like that I wake,

And tears fill up my eyes.

Knowing you were here,

And held me thru the night.

Its still hard to believe,

I'll never feel your touch.

That even in my dreams,

I miss you so very much.

At sleep I'm in peace,

In heaven I will tell.

But when morn comes around,

I wake in nothing but Hell.

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On January 18th 2008 NisaNicole Said :
NisaNicole I really like this. It is very well written, but very sad...good job.
On January 15th 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess This one is pricelessly moving. I'm not sure I have a critique beyond that :-D
On January 13th 2008 ausjo Said :
ausjo So pained and powerful. Just beautiful.
On January 12th 2008 barbaraew Said :
barbaraew great writting
On January 11th 2008 professormcgee Said :
professormcgee i would agree that i definatly appeal to this poem sleep seems to be the only escape i have nemore, awesome poem!!
On January 10th 2008 amshaye Said :
amshaye awesome its great
On January 10th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch I understand, at least know this he is always with you sweet one and has never left your sides. Some never know it even if they dream. It is a small gift from heaven to feel the love of the departed. But it is lonely not being held when you want. Beautifully written.
On January 9th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Wow...sweet, emotional...Amazing work!
On January 9th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 omg *speechless* wow!!!!!dis is like great!!!!i cant describe ot though omg its good tho!!!
On January 9th 2008 TwilightRose89 Said :
TwilightRose89 Very nice, the emotion is just seeping from every word.
On January 9th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said :
run4w4ytr4in I really like this, it hold alot of emotion.
On January 9th 2008 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Under rated by the way. If I could vote more than once I would!
On January 9th 2008 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Wow! Good job! Love the last four lines the most. Very sad though!! Gave me the chills! Again Good Job!
On January 9th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord This was soo sad and so beautifully written, it had me in tears, i can but only imagen the pain of waking every morning, knowing that you have to go on without them. Knowing that they are there but never to hold.
On January 9th 2008 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 Would you let me know your thoughts about this poem.