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Would You Cry for Me.

Views (364) Passion Created on 1-5-08 Flag
Would you cry for me.
If I died for you.
Would you love me
If I were tried and true.
Would you give praise
If I done right.
Or Become Enraged
and Beat me at night.
Would you great with smiles
at morning glow
Or bury me deep
Beneath December snow.
Would Heaven's gates
Be what I see.
Or Hell's flame
Sucumb me.
Would I count on you
To be my friend.
Or will you be
My bitter end.
Would you run away
Or stand true.
Would you cry for me....
If I died for you.
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On January 15th 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess With the exception of the one word mispelled, which can throw off the rhythm when one reads, it is another great poem from you. Well done doll
On January 8th 2008 JLOVE3 Said :
JLOVE3 oH WOW!!!!!!!! That is amazing!!!!! I love it.
On January 6th 2008 TwilightRose89 Said :
TwilightRose89 This is very deep and very nicely written, it seemed a little awkward in some places but that might be just what you were also going for.
On January 6th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 wow i liked it
On January 5th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Really emotional, awesome work!
On January 5th 2008 breepers Said :
breepers I like it!
On January 5th 2008 dixie4life16 Said :
my picture
that is a gud poem and deep and touching
On January 5th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 *speechless*its really deep and good is all i can say!GOOOOOD JOB!!!!!=]
On January 5th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch this is awesome. I really feel bad that I was gone so long. Keep writing and i hope you are both well.
On January 5th 2008 tallman5000 Said :
tallman5000 i like it
On January 5th 2008 LauraMedia Said :
LauraMedia I really love this great job
On January 5th 2008 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Very deep! I agree! It's hard to trust someone so completely not fully knowing what they'll do with it....Too true! Good job! Love it!
On January 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord ooo hell girl this is soo deep and touching it really moved me. brilliantly written, In my opinion, your best piece thus far!
On January 5th 2008 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 Let me know what you think.